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Post by Palustris on Sept 27, 2022 17:38:36 GMT 1
Have put the first chapters on so it makes me have to go on with it. Comments more than welcome.
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Post by hilberry on Sept 28, 2022 10:34:56 GMT 1
Yep, you have to continue with your amusing story. I'm enjoying silliness! I hope you are too, it's quite different to your other stories.
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Post by peonymad on Sept 28, 2022 10:51:08 GMT 1
Loving the story Pal, made me smile, keep it up.
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Post by Mommydoos on Sept 28, 2022 12:44:18 GMT 1
I'm excited to see what other aphorisms you can weave in
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Post by Palustris on Sept 28, 2022 13:25:38 GMT 1
May be a while for the next bit, we have been out this morning so no writing and must do other things this afternoon. You need to hope for rain!
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Post by Palustris on Sept 28, 2022 16:16:43 GMT 1
It rained!!!!!!!!!
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Post by hilberry on Sept 28, 2022 17:51:52 GMT 1
Loved the One Horse Town!
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Post by peonymad on Sept 29, 2022 14:02:32 GMT 1
So many things that made me smile. Thank you pal, hope for more rain I think.
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Post by hilberry on Sept 29, 2022 14:12:45 GMT 1
Heaven knows, it's delightfully silly!
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Post by Palustris on Sept 29, 2022 15:15:56 GMT 1
Having to be very careful that it does not morph into The Phantom Tollbooth or The 31st of June. Both fabulous books hat I wish I had written.
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Post by hilberry on Sept 29, 2022 15:53:21 GMT 1
Having to be very careful that it does not morph into The Phantom Tollbooth or The 31st of June. Both fabulous books hat I wish I had written. I don't know these books. Are they recent, i.e. since I left the UK, 25 years ago?
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Post by Palustris on Sept 29, 2022 16:00:33 GMT 1
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Post by hilberry on Sept 29, 2022 16:36:32 GMT 1
They sound really great. I wish I'd had them for Jerri when he was a nipper.
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Post by Palustris on Sept 30, 2022 8:55:29 GMT 1
Anyone think of some uniformed type to whom a new idea would be anathema? Or a type of very thick skinned person?
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Post by Palustris on Sept 30, 2022 10:10:11 GMT 1
No need. Came up with a solution on my walk Thanks.
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Post by Palustris on Oct 1, 2022 9:46:09 GMT 1
Sorry, but have had to make some alterations to the next chapters so it may take a day to get them posted.
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Post by Palustris on Oct 1, 2022 10:24:24 GMT 1
Managed to do the alteration quicker than anticipated so next chapter is ok. Chapter after that is going to take a while.
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Post by Palustris on Oct 1, 2022 21:01:13 GMT 1
Once again the walk up the road produced the alterations to the next part of the story. Hope you are all enjoying it so far.
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Post by hilberry on Oct 2, 2022 10:52:39 GMT 1
Loved the Pool Of Ideas!
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Post by Miss Piggin on Oct 2, 2022 11:05:30 GMT 1
The bit about steering the craft needs altering, both ways turn right.
This is a great story, really imaginative.
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Post by Palustris on Oct 2, 2022 12:03:10 GMT 1
The bit about steering the craft needs altering, both ways turn right. This is a great story, really imaginative Please explain. I ain't no boater.
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Post by Mommydoos on Oct 2, 2022 12:11:05 GMT 1
"If we slow down my engine and speed up George's engine, the raft turns to the right, and if we slow George's and speed up mine, we turn to the right. I thought the same Miss P
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Post by Palustris on Oct 2, 2022 13:17:05 GMT 1
Ta!
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Post by Mommydoos on Oct 2, 2022 14:15:17 GMT 1
See....we are paying attention
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Post by Palustris on Oct 2, 2022 14:23:37 GMT 1
Good. I should hate to be writing this rubbish without someone at least glancing at it.
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Post by Palustris on Oct 2, 2022 20:18:40 GMT 1
I have posted the next piece as we are going out tomorrow so it would not get on until late.
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Post by Palustris on Oct 3, 2022 8:55:17 GMT 1
Next chapter has to be completely reworked as I really do not like it so it may not appear for a while Sorry.
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Post by Palustris on Oct 5, 2022 10:44:07 GMT 1
And that is it, Couple of errors in that last part, but it would not let me edit. Comments and opinions very welcome.
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Post by Miss Piggin on Oct 5, 2022 11:03:20 GMT 1
Brilliant! I really enjoyed that, it made me smile, a lot!
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Post by hilberry on Oct 5, 2022 11:15:03 GMT 1
Me too! I even laughed! Now, have a well earned rest before embarking on the next story.
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