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Post by Palustris on Feb 22, 2024 10:39:03 GMT 1
Thanks. Altered in the original. Not sure how I could extend the last chapter except with a description of Glom's wedding. Or, Peg and Richard getting together. I tried to suggest that they had a future rather than describe it. Fooled you with that didn't I? It had to be something that the other Nithlings recognised as a talent.
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Post by peonymad on Feb 22, 2024 13:07:55 GMT 1
I have enjoyed it too Pal, I think the suggestion of a future for Peg and Richard is a better finish than trying to describe one. Perhaps an X number of years later the travelling players do their rounds again and peg and Richard visit glom perhaps with their children, and they have a new play with a troll, tree spirit and a Gnom equivalent.
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Post by Nooj on Feb 22, 2024 17:35:23 GMT 1
I wonder if I have a talent?
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Post by hilberry on Feb 22, 2024 18:31:25 GMT 1
I wonder if I have a talent? The shed is a safe place to try, Nooj. Have you got an idea to start with?
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Post by Nooj on Feb 23, 2024 15:26:05 GMT 1
No idea at all..........
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Post by Palustris on Feb 23, 2024 15:45:05 GMT 1
I find either a title or character name is a good beginning. Try doing a spoonerism on things around you. EG. Fingers crossed comes out as Crongers Fissed. So there is a name to conjure with. Ask Who? Why? When? What happened. What happened before? What happened next? Or, "Owned by the Cipher." How about that for a title? Away you go!
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Post by Palustris on Feb 24, 2024 9:12:36 GMT 1
Been going through the Glom story in my head and I need to add a fair amount to remove some holes in the plot and to make it a bit longer. Glad you folks enjoyed the 'raw' version.
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Post by Palustris on Feb 24, 2024 15:42:47 GMT 1
I think I have filled all the holes and added a few bits to it. If anyone wants to read it now, I can send it as a PDF which can be downloaded to a Kindle or Fire thingy.
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